A look at the comic Series made by me. Read right to left. Contains violence, mild sexual material, crude humor, and language. For audiences 13 and over
Tuesday, July 2, 2013
Wild Card Fighter Chapter 1: The High School of Warriors [Page 7]
I think you should finish the entire first chapter, and then get the feedback of some artists and friends before you post it. Not trying to be cruel but it looks like a ROUGH first draft. If this is something you seriously want to do I recommended some more work. Just trying to be constructive because the panel layout IS well done.
I appreciate the criticism. This particular method of art style was my choice, but I promise to do better. Thanks for the support. I'm done with the first chapter in English. And will post more pages soon on this blog.
I appreciate the criticism. This particular method of art style was my choice, but I promise to do better. Thanks for the support. I'm done with the first chapter in English. And will post more pages soon on this blog.
I think you should finish the entire first chapter, and then get the feedback of some artists and friends before you post it. Not trying to be cruel but it looks like a ROUGH first draft. If this is something you seriously want to do I recommended some more work. Just trying to be constructive because the panel layout IS well done.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the criticism. This particular method of art style was my choice, but I promise to do better. Thanks for the support. I'm done with the first chapter in English. And will post more pages soon on this blog.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the criticism. This particular method of art style was my choice, but I promise to do better. Thanks for the support. I'm done with the first chapter in English. And will post more pages soon on this blog.
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